6 Mayıs 2010 Perşembe

Argumantative Essay...

THE PROBLEM OF ABSENTEEIZM

People are born , gro and start to go to school at early ages. They go different schools for a long time. The firs step is primary school where they learn the basic things of everything. The next step is high school and university. However, although they go different schools only problem which remains as the same is absenteeizm. Many educated people think it is good but , in fact , there are many bad sides of absenteeizm.

Firstly, because of absenteeizm students are afraid of fail and they think that it is an obligation to go to school,so they attend the lessons unwillingly. This is the most important and common reason for students.If they attend willingly they will be more successful and this leads them to be better in the future. That is to say, attendence to the classes mustn't be thought as an obligation.

Secondly, students are far away from social activities outside due to the absenteeizm and they aren't interested in classes because they always think the activities which they can't join.So, school seems to be hell for them.

Thirdly, some hardworking students have problems not to go to school such as ilnesses, death of somebody or psychological problems. Besides, some teachers don't understand these situations and they make them fail even though they are willing to come to the lessons.

In conclusion, although absenteeizm is the least important issue teachers see it as if it is the most important thing. So, it becomes as a big problem among all students.Education mustn't be depend on the rules because only thing which is important is the interest of lessons.

2 yorum:

  1. Hi YAZGI,
    I like this essay and your organization.The essay is easy to understand.You did well.There is a grammer mistake "Education mustn't be depend on " see you.

    YanıtlaSil
  2. Hi yazkim :)
    I lıked your eaay even there are a little bit grammer mistakes.But again I didn't understand how to write it unfortunately :) give me lesson about it :) muck.

    YanıtlaSil