4 Ocak 2013 Cuma
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Hep derler değil mi konuşamıyorsanız yazın, içinizde kalmasın. İşte tam olarak ben de onu yapıyorum şu an. Ağzımdan çıkaramadıklarımı klavyeye kusmak istedim. Tüm kırgınlığımı buraya dökmek, içimi temizlemek ve en azından bu gece rahat uyumak istedim..
Hani bazı zamanlar vardır, kendinizi bir hiç gibi hissedersiniz. Hiç öneminiz yokmuş gibi, yeryüzünde yaşamaya çalışan basit bir hücre topluluğu gibi. Ben de öyle hissediyorum evet. Yaralanmış hissdeiyorum. Öyle bir yara ki bu, tedavisi yok, ilacı yok küçültecek.. Öyle bir yara ki ellerin buz gibi ama için alev gibi.. Öyle bir yara ki değerin yokmuş gibi, hep kanayıp tekrar tekrar nüksedecek gibi..
Hiçlik, boşluk, yokluk.. Sanki hep var olan şeylermiş gibi hissetirmedi mi size de? En kararlı olduğunuz anda bile tek bir sözle kararınızdan vazgeçeceğinizi hissetmenin verdiği hüsranı yaşamadınız mı? Ben tam olarak bunu yaaşıyorum. Nefret ediyorum, kızıyorum, öfkemden deliye dönüyorum, ağlıyorum ama yine de boşvermeyi beceremiyorum..
Akışına bırakmayı, olmamış gibi davranmayı beceremiyorum. Kendimi düşünmekten alıkoyamıyorum..
8 Kasım 2010 Pazartesi
Group Work About Narration Essay
AFTER A FANTASTIC DAY
It was a sunny afternoon in Zonguldak (şehir değiştirilebilir). The sun was shining outside, the sea was smart like a bed sheet; the birds were flying and crowing as if they were singing, and I was preparing a perfect breakfast for my family. We all were in the positive mood that the day had given to us. At the table, we were making jokes each other, laughing, talking ... We were so happy. My father and my mother had a plan including going to seashore, camping out. So happy to hear that, my sisters and I immediately began to prepare for that wonderfull day we would spend...
I put my the best warmest clothes for night which we would spend there. My sisters also prepared her packback. My mother prepared delicious food and she also prepared drinks and she put them in a big basket. At the same time, my father was interested in tecnical things like checking our car, our tempt which was huge and colorful like objects of a carnaval. We set off after everything was ready. The place which we went was very freshful and it had clear atmosphere. Sea was very calm and many seagulls were flying above it. At such a nice place we spent good time like talking with each member of the family,telling stories which were horror,funny,playing games... At last the night finished and we had a nice night. After all we started to get ready to go home,we picked our equipment and put them into the car.
We got in our car after all preperations. Just as we were about to go,the weather immediately turned into redness.The sun escaped its hole ,the trees’ leaves were shaking rhtmly and the birds were singing as a group.There weren’t any animals out as if they predicted the incoming disaster and I could hear something approaching us , but I could not see anything.My family was supposed to understand what I felt ,so they left the car and looked out a scare in their eyes like me. We were all loking the incoming disaster. The clouds turned into black while everything were going well. Following that raining started slowly and it speeded up more and more. Waves started to occur in the sea with the shirply wind. A yatch which had a tour with tourists was going to right and left and we were feeling the hurry of people from here. At that time also we found safetly place to stay in with the other people who were camping like us. Something were getting worse at the yatch, it was clear that the yatch was out of control. The sea was playing with yatch as if a child had played with her toy. At last the yatch ditn’t put up with and listed. We couldn’t do anything but watching what was going on. Soon, storm began to lose its effectiveness and some people were trying to swim to the seashore in order to save themselves.
Finally coast guard had arrived when the storm was calm down and there were two ambulance for injured. Fortunately there was no dead after this destructive storm. We took a comfort breathe when we arrived at home but this storm effected all of us because we had never seen such a big storm at close range. I will never forget that day!
Yazgı ÇELİK
Sema DİPİ
Merve DÖNMEZ
Ender DEMİRCİ
It was a sunny afternoon in Zonguldak (şehir değiştirilebilir). The sun was shining outside, the sea was smart like a bed sheet; the birds were flying and crowing as if they were singing, and I was preparing a perfect breakfast for my family. We all were in the positive mood that the day had given to us. At the table, we were making jokes each other, laughing, talking ... We were so happy. My father and my mother had a plan including going to seashore, camping out. So happy to hear that, my sisters and I immediately began to prepare for that wonderfull day we would spend...
I put my the best warmest clothes for night which we would spend there. My sisters also prepared her packback. My mother prepared delicious food and she also prepared drinks and she put them in a big basket. At the same time, my father was interested in tecnical things like checking our car, our tempt which was huge and colorful like objects of a carnaval. We set off after everything was ready. The place which we went was very freshful and it had clear atmosphere. Sea was very calm and many seagulls were flying above it. At such a nice place we spent good time like talking with each member of the family,telling stories which were horror,funny,playing games... At last the night finished and we had a nice night. After all we started to get ready to go home,we picked our equipment and put them into the car.
We got in our car after all preperations. Just as we were about to go,the weather immediately turned into redness.The sun escaped its hole ,the trees’ leaves were shaking rhtmly and the birds were singing as a group.There weren’t any animals out as if they predicted the incoming disaster and I could hear something approaching us , but I could not see anything.My family was supposed to understand what I felt ,so they left the car and looked out a scare in their eyes like me. We were all loking the incoming disaster. The clouds turned into black while everything were going well. Following that raining started slowly and it speeded up more and more. Waves started to occur in the sea with the shirply wind. A yatch which had a tour with tourists was going to right and left and we were feeling the hurry of people from here. At that time also we found safetly place to stay in with the other people who were camping like us. Something were getting worse at the yatch, it was clear that the yatch was out of control. The sea was playing with yatch as if a child had played with her toy. At last the yatch ditn’t put up with and listed. We couldn’t do anything but watching what was going on. Soon, storm began to lose its effectiveness and some people were trying to swim to the seashore in order to save themselves.
Finally coast guard had arrived when the storm was calm down and there were two ambulance for injured. Fortunately there was no dead after this destructive storm. We took a comfort breathe when we arrived at home but this storm effected all of us because we had never seen such a big storm at close range. I will never forget that day!
Yazgı ÇELİK
Sema DİPİ
Merve DÖNMEZ
Ender DEMİRCİ
25 Ekim 2010 Pazartesi
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Comparison Paragraph.
LIFE IS GOOD SOMEWHAT
There are two films: Angela's Ashes and Miracle Worker...While watching, I sometimes got bored, sometimes felt depressed and sometimes got excited. I liked Angela's Ashes more than Miracle Worker , because Miracle Worker was a little bit boring to me. In Angela's Ashes, I thought my father for a while. If my father did the same things as Franky's father did, I would never forgive him. The film made me angry about family relationships as I saw him on the screen, and I thanked to God in that I don't have such a bad and desperate life... In Miracle Worker , I only realized that being a successsful person is very important. If a person wants to achieve something, there is nothing that she can't do. Both films are dramatic and emotinal, you can watch them if you like these kinds of films,I think. Anyway, life is good somewhat...
There are two films: Angela's Ashes and Miracle Worker...While watching, I sometimes got bored, sometimes felt depressed and sometimes got excited. I liked Angela's Ashes more than Miracle Worker , because Miracle Worker was a little bit boring to me. In Angela's Ashes, I thought my father for a while. If my father did the same things as Franky's father did, I would never forgive him. The film made me angry about family relationships as I saw him on the screen, and I thanked to God in that I don't have such a bad and desperate life... In Miracle Worker , I only realized that being a successsful person is very important. If a person wants to achieve something, there is nothing that she can't do. Both films are dramatic and emotinal, you can watch them if you like these kinds of films,I think. Anyway, life is good somewhat...
20 Mayıs 2010 Perşembe
Compare & Contrast Essay...
HIGH SCHOOL STUDENTS' STRESS
Being a high school student is really hard, because they pass from childhood to adulthood, and they have hardships in their lives, so they are stressed in many situations.
Firstly, they have to study hard to enter a good university and when they fail an exam they feel desperate. While they want to be the best student among their friends they may ignore other things.
Secondly, they want to have a good relationship with their friends and if these relationships aren't good , they feel alone and depressed. Always they want to be the first person who can be talked. Also, they fall in love and if they can't take its reaction, they feel depressed,too.
Thirdly, due to the puberty reactions, they think they are ugly and they start to compare themselves to others. They ask questions such as "who am I?", "Why do I live in such a bad life?" or "Why am I not rich?". These questions make them feel stressful.
In conclusion, high school age is important because it is a passing period. Students are likely to have stressful times.However, This period is temporary and it shouldn't be ignored by their families.
Being a high school student is really hard, because they pass from childhood to adulthood, and they have hardships in their lives, so they are stressed in many situations.
Firstly, they have to study hard to enter a good university and when they fail an exam they feel desperate. While they want to be the best student among their friends they may ignore other things.
Secondly, they want to have a good relationship with their friends and if these relationships aren't good , they feel alone and depressed. Always they want to be the first person who can be talked. Also, they fall in love and if they can't take its reaction, they feel depressed,too.
Thirdly, due to the puberty reactions, they think they are ugly and they start to compare themselves to others. They ask questions such as "who am I?", "Why do I live in such a bad life?" or "Why am I not rich?". These questions make them feel stressful.
In conclusion, high school age is important because it is a passing period. Students are likely to have stressful times.However, This period is temporary and it shouldn't be ignored by their families.
6 Mayıs 2010 Perşembe
Classification Essay...
DIFFERENT TYPES OF TEACHERS
There are a lot of people in our lives. Some of them are our relatives,the other ones are our friends. We put these people in the centre of our lives and ,as you know, among these people teachers are the most important ones after our family. Each teacher is different from each other. There are three personalities teachers have such as being strict, moderate and easygoing.
The first type is the strict teachers. When they are late for something or somewhere they get angry. They act their students agrily and they don't see anything. Instead of losing time, they create different things themselves. Also, they usually like serious students and they want them to be hardworking in theie lessons. Besides, they think seriously in their lives,too. They don't like kiding , that is to say, if someone makes o joke to thmen they react sharply. I think these types of teachers aren't usually loved in daily life.
The second type is moderate teachers. When they are late for something or somewhere they don't worry about it and they immediately arrange a new plan.Moreover, they get on with every kind of students. So , when students even behave badly these teachers don't angry with them too much. Also, they look at the life with two points: both positive and negative. They are optimistic mostly. They don't want to think about other people.
The las type is easygoing teachers.When they are late for something they don't think it is a bad situation. They are always positive people. They think everything is and will be alright.Besides, they like students because they are harmonious to negative ones. If they behave badly these teaches can easily put up with them. However, they are patient to some extend. As long as they live they always look for positive life.To me, they are loved more than the other types of teachers.
In conclusion, teachers are different from each other. Some are moderate, some are strict and some are easygoing. However, every kind of teacher is necessary for education. If we want to get on with teachers we must respect all of them.
There are a lot of people in our lives. Some of them are our relatives,the other ones are our friends. We put these people in the centre of our lives and ,as you know, among these people teachers are the most important ones after our family. Each teacher is different from each other. There are three personalities teachers have such as being strict, moderate and easygoing.
The first type is the strict teachers. When they are late for something or somewhere they get angry. They act their students agrily and they don't see anything. Instead of losing time, they create different things themselves. Also, they usually like serious students and they want them to be hardworking in theie lessons. Besides, they think seriously in their lives,too. They don't like kiding , that is to say, if someone makes o joke to thmen they react sharply. I think these types of teachers aren't usually loved in daily life.
The second type is moderate teachers. When they are late for something or somewhere they don't worry about it and they immediately arrange a new plan.Moreover, they get on with every kind of students. So , when students even behave badly these teachers don't angry with them too much. Also, they look at the life with two points: both positive and negative. They are optimistic mostly. They don't want to think about other people.
The las type is easygoing teachers.When they are late for something they don't think it is a bad situation. They are always positive people. They think everything is and will be alright.Besides, they like students because they are harmonious to negative ones. If they behave badly these teaches can easily put up with them. However, they are patient to some extend. As long as they live they always look for positive life.To me, they are loved more than the other types of teachers.
In conclusion, teachers are different from each other. Some are moderate, some are strict and some are easygoing. However, every kind of teacher is necessary for education. If we want to get on with teachers we must respect all of them.
Argumantative Essay...
THE PROBLEM OF ABSENTEEIZM
People are born , gro and start to go to school at early ages. They go different schools for a long time. The firs step is primary school where they learn the basic things of everything. The next step is high school and university. However, although they go different schools only problem which remains as the same is absenteeizm. Many educated people think it is good but , in fact , there are many bad sides of absenteeizm.
Firstly, because of absenteeizm students are afraid of fail and they think that it is an obligation to go to school,so they attend the lessons unwillingly. This is the most important and common reason for students.If they attend willingly they will be more successful and this leads them to be better in the future. That is to say, attendence to the classes mustn't be thought as an obligation.
Secondly, students are far away from social activities outside due to the absenteeizm and they aren't interested in classes because they always think the activities which they can't join.So, school seems to be hell for them.
Thirdly, some hardworking students have problems not to go to school such as ilnesses, death of somebody or psychological problems. Besides, some teachers don't understand these situations and they make them fail even though they are willing to come to the lessons.
In conclusion, although absenteeizm is the least important issue teachers see it as if it is the most important thing. So, it becomes as a big problem among all students.Education mustn't be depend on the rules because only thing which is important is the interest of lessons.
People are born , gro and start to go to school at early ages. They go different schools for a long time. The firs step is primary school where they learn the basic things of everything. The next step is high school and university. However, although they go different schools only problem which remains as the same is absenteeizm. Many educated people think it is good but , in fact , there are many bad sides of absenteeizm.
Firstly, because of absenteeizm students are afraid of fail and they think that it is an obligation to go to school,so they attend the lessons unwillingly. This is the most important and common reason for students.If they attend willingly they will be more successful and this leads them to be better in the future. That is to say, attendence to the classes mustn't be thought as an obligation.
Secondly, students are far away from social activities outside due to the absenteeizm and they aren't interested in classes because they always think the activities which they can't join.So, school seems to be hell for them.
Thirdly, some hardworking students have problems not to go to school such as ilnesses, death of somebody or psychological problems. Besides, some teachers don't understand these situations and they make them fail even though they are willing to come to the lessons.
In conclusion, although absenteeizm is the least important issue teachers see it as if it is the most important thing. So, it becomes as a big problem among all students.Education mustn't be depend on the rules because only thing which is important is the interest of lessons.
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