11 Mart 2010 Perşembe

opinion essay...

LOVE AND MARRIAGE
Everybody falls in love in their lives and they want to live the rest of their lives together with their loved ones.In our country, some people marry foreign ones and most of them say that they are happy.In addition, the rate of this kind of marriage has increased in recent years.Have you ever thought a marriage to someone from another country,then?In my opinion there are more useful and harmful reasons with this subject.

First of all,religions and beliefs are different and families may oppose to this idea.Second,it may be a disaggrement where to stay after marriage: While you want to stay in your own country,your spouse wants to stay in his own country.However,as the opposite of all these disaggrements,there are o lot of aggrements,too.For example you can leran another language and culture.Your child or children will be billigual.Then,you can introduce your culture to other places.

In short,it is a confusing sitiuation.Unless there is an obstacle,people do whatever they want.Falling in love and marrying someone is a good thing to me.

2 yorum:

  1. Dear Yazgı,
    your intrpduction is good and effective.
    your body also good,but have both some spelling mistake and grammatical mistake.for example:

    First of all,religions and beliefs are different and families(.....,so families..)
    For example you can leran(learn)
    Your child or children will be billigual(bilingual)
    your conclusion is very effective,but has a mistake
    Falling in love and marrying someone is a good thing to me(fall in love with aand marry someone...)that is all dear:)I liked your essay thanks.

    YanıtlaSil
  2. My friend you are right but when you write on pc it is probably that you will make mistakes:):) anyway,thank you.I will be careful:)

    YanıtlaSil