AN IMPORTANT PLACE TO ME
There is a place that everyone feels themselves comfortable.Of course I have a favorite place,too.I think my kitchen is the best place of the house, and now I want to tell you my kitchen.
It isn't too big but it is very nice place.With its blue walls and light brown cupboard,it is very eye-catching.In front of the little pretty window there is an old sofa and I like sitting on it.One door of the kitchen is opened out into a big balcony and I can see colourful flowers.Preparing the meals in such place is enjojeble very much.There are a lot of photographs of my family on the white fridge.Sometimes I look at them which make me happy.I can do most things which I do in other places.I both watch tv and entertain my guests.I really love this nice place.
In conclusion,you probably feel yourselves in a specific place,and I told you my favorite room.What about you?
it has hook,thesis statement etc..all the rules are used but it is too short essay.may be you could describe more.In conclusion is good and it is too short,also. :) if you use more descriptive,it will more good my dear ;)
YanıtlaSilyour grammar is well and also ı like your kitchen:)but ı want to hear more things about your kitchen.you should expand this essay my baby.
YanıtlaSilintroduction, hook and thesis statement are very effective. Grammar is used correctly. I agree with seda.I can imagine there easily, however;you can write more about kitchen. see you dear:)
YanıtlaSilhi yazgııı,
YanıtlaSilIntroduction is really good..Your adjectives are effective enough for me to draw a picture of your favourite place.Conclusion can be longer..You did well.see you later.
dear yazgı,
YanıtlaSilyour essay is good but your sentences are very short you have used adjectives to make more discription.ıf you use more complex sentences using relative clauses it will be better.see you generally it is good.